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Thursday, 30 July 2015

My poem about emotion

Fear is orange like the fire of the sun
It tastes like old decomposing potatoes
It smells like bad smelly rubbish from the dump
It look like a haunted apartment on the street
It sounds like a rattling snake
It feels like you can not go anywhere

Fear   

1 comment:

  1. Wow - I had shivers running up my spine reading this... sounds like a rattling snake... scary!!
    Well done Danny, you've used similes and great descriptive language

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