I finally made it..... (Narrative writing)

One day there was a boy named “Josh”, he has a black hair, wearing a red tracksuit and a black running shoe. He was trying to accomplish a goal, Josh joined a marathon. The marathon was “tomorrow” he said, he wanted to come 1st in that marathon because he want to show people that he is good.

The next morning he was at the marathon, Josh was very scared that he won’t make it half way. Josh and the other competitors were ready to run, the horn went off. Josh was jogging on the start, the other competitors were off sprinting. Josh was just taking his time thinking he will catch up with the others, he sawed a bunch of people puffed out. Josh was angry at the people for sprinting off, he said to himself “Why did they run to fast”. Josh just jogged away from the competitors.

An hour later, Josh was 1 km away from the finish line. Josh was puff out from the longest run he have ever experience, Josh was sprinting he was passing other people, he tripped over. People just ran passed him like nothing happen, Josh was yelling in pain. Medical people came and try to sought out Josh, the medic people said “He needs to come of the running track”, they picked him up on the stretches. Josh said Is my leg in a really bad condition”, the medic people reply “Yes”, Josh was shocked. He made a goal to make it to the finish line.

Josh just ripped of the belt from the stretches, limping his way towards the finish line. The medical people rush towards Josh, they were telling him to “Stop, your are in very bad conditions”. He just ignored them and limped his way to the finish line. People was cheering him on, “Let go Josh, let go Josh”, as they cheering him on, Josh was 5 metres away from the finish line. He didn’t know what to do, yelling “Ouch” as he was limping. He finally made it towards the finish line, people was yelling “Yayyyy”. He started to cried, he was crying in tears of joy, but at the same time he was in pain. Josh got rushed to the hospital, the doctors said “If you didn’t ran towards the finish line you wouldn’t been in critical condition”.

The next day, Josh got was alright to go back home. He ranged up his wife to pick him up at Waledale hospital. Josh was relief that he made to the finish line yesterday afternoon, Josh went home if a happy smile.

I heard a whisper (Narrative writing)

One day there was one boy named Sonny. Sonny was in the forest and he was sitting down reading his book. Sonny was reading his book in peace, until he heard something crawling around him, he didn’t care what was happening. Sonny heard whispers from the bush, he was very concerned that it was a little mouse whining.

30 minutes later, someone starting yelling his name. He was scared and he started running back to his car. He got lost in the middle of the the forest. Sonny was looking for his phone. He just realized that he left it where he was sitting. Sonny was yelling as loud as he can, but no one could hear him. Sonny heard someone whispering “I am coming”. Sonny was paralysed, he didn’t know what to do. He could hear someone talking at the back of the bushes. Sonny was yelling out as loud as he could so he can get someone’s attention.

He was raising his voice with tears coming down. The whisper started to come back, yelling “Sonny where are you”, his heart was pounding. He could hear someone walking along the pathway, Sonny was yelling “HELP, HELP, HELP”, someone was running towards Sonny. He jumped up and tried to run towards that person. Sonny was yelling and yelling, until he found that person that was looking for him.

Sonny was relief that he found someone to help, but he wasn’t to happy. The whisper came back through the bush saying “I’m still here”. Sonny was telling that person to run. They both started running, the whisper came back saying “I’m coming to get you”. Sonny didn’t care, he ignored the whisper and ran straight to the parking lot. After some time Sonny and the stranger started to get along with each other, the stranger introduced himself, his name was Fergo. he was an` olympic winner for 1989, 400 meters sprints.

Sonny was noticing whispers coming everywhere again. He was freaking out, Fergo was asking him if he was okay, Sonny had no response back. Sonny was running away from Fergo, he got into his car and “Rammmm” away. Fergo got furious with Sonny, so Fergo just walked away like nothing happened. Sonny was calmed, he was also terrified of what happened. After some hours Sonny relaxed in his lounge, he felt like sleeping, but he didn’t want to dream about what happened today.

The next morning he woke up, he was underneath his blanket with a cramped leg. Sonny got out of bed and he was doing his morning routine. Sonny was late for work, he was happy as he was going to work and he is no terrified anymore.