Special place in our community (Writing)

As you can see I had to chose a special place in our community, I’ve explained what I’ve chosen, why I chosen it and how come I go to that special place. I’ve putted a lot of effort into doing this.

After we’ve finished doing our writing we’ve had to get a partner to check our work and highlight a word or sentences as well as add a comment so our partner can identify why this word it highlighted. When our partner finish fixing up their work they had to swap netbooks so they can give our writing a score by using rubrics. So my score was 40 and that is 5A.

I hope you will enjoy reading my writing and also leave a comment on this blogpost about anything that you think will need more fixing up on this writing.

The reason why I’ve chosen the Basketball courts because I always go there to play with my friends and just have a blast. There is another reason why I’ve chosen the Basketball courts is because I get to practice some new skills before I verse my friends on a Basketball sessions.

The Basketball courts is very close to my house, as I walk to the Basketball courts I find it easier to walk because it’s not really that far. I like to go there because I get to practice alone instead of anyone bordering me. The people in the community come and play at the same Basketball court as where I’m playing at, the worst thing is that I don’t like it some people come and hog the Basketball court to themself, it’s like they are the owner of the Basketball Court.

After school If I have time to play outside I will make my way to the Basketball Court so I get practice. The name of the area where the Basketball court is “Fernwood”, as everyone come and bond at the Basketball court is very fun and amazing. I get to play with more people instead of having to get sweaty and still play with the same person over and over again.

The Basketball court is very important to the people around the community because it has a very expensive hoop and they might get stolen by a robber. It is very valuable to the neighbours around the Basketball Court  because they are like bodyguards and they can play on the Basketball court whenever they want.

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My Career (Basketball)

My Career is based on shooting balls in the hoop and having to cooperate with each other, it’s a type of sport where you team up and of cause it’s “Basketball”. Basketball is a wonderful sport where a head coach coaches the team so they can be a successful player when they play.

The person that inspired me to play Basketball is “Julian Newman”, he shows that he can play very well as well as a good trainer. Julian Newman started playing Basketball when he was 3 years old, he is only 16 years old and he is so incredible in his career, he plays for the Varsity Basketball team at Downey High School in Orlando Florida. He has 1 sibling name “Jaden Newman”.

He is a very good professional Basketball player and he is trying to make his way into any of the NBA team, he is trying to confront that he is good in front of LaMelo Ball. LaMelo and Julian is trying to have a game against each other before they both go into the NBA.

My Career is going to be good for me in the future because I can earn heaps of money and the world will see my talent and skills.

Basketball recount`

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Today on the 5th of may we went to play basketball.

name was Chanel. We started getting into partners. We went and got a Basketball. Chanel showed us some ball handling skills. Me and my partners started to get it. I spun the ball around my stomach and legs.

We played a game called Dribble Tag. I this game you have to dribble the ball but no running, we have to power walk in the game even your partner is not post to be running. I was the first person to be the tagger everyone else was trying to learn I knew how to play so that why  I was the tagger.

The next game we played Ship Shark Shore, that game was so hard to play because I did not know where to go. I went out because I come last twice in a row but I still had fun. We played the fun game called Octopus it was kind of different, but it was like Bull Rush but we had a Basketball. I was the tagger there was no throwing ball but some people was not tag.

I had a lot of fun but it was a little bit hard.