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Friday 19 June 2015

rubric for my writing



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Ideas
  • Ideas don’t have details to describe, and need more information.
  • 3 main ideas
  • Using describing words to tell what happened.
  • 3 or more main ideas.
  • Using describing words to tell what happened.
  • Describing why or how each idea is important.
Vocab/ Words

  • No descriptive words
  • Not many specific words to add detail.
  • Uses some technical/specific words but could use more
  • Use a few describing words (adjectives) but could use more
  • Using specific words to add detail. eg. Rotunda instead of meeting place
  • Use descriptive words (adjectives) to create help a picture in our mind with our words.
Text Structure

5W’s = Where What Why When Who
  • Uses some of the 5W’s & How
  • Uses some time linking words.
  • May have a short conclusion with feelings.
  • Introduction has 5W’s and How
  • Paragraph’s start with connectives time linking words.
  • Conclusion only has the feeling.
  • Use a ‘Hook in’ to grab the reader’s attention.
  • Introduction has 5W’s & How to quickly describe the recount.
  • Paragraphs start with connectives (time linking words)
  • Conclusion repeats the main ideas, and how we felt or liked most..
Sentence Structure
  • Capitals and full stops not always used.
  • Some sentences make sense, some past and present tense not used right.
  • Sentences carry on too long and should have more full stops.
  • Sentences start the same way.  
  • Sentences start with capitals and end with full stops.
  • Most sentences make sense.
  • Has some compound sentences
  • Sentences carry on too long and should have more full stops.
  • Some sentence starters are repeated.
  • Sentences start with capital letters and end with full stops.
  • Sentences make sense and use past and present tense correctly.
  • Use FANBOYS to make compound sentences.
  • Sentences start differently (not the same starting) to add interest.

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