Danny S : grandpa what did you did in the war

Saturday, 9 May 2015

WALT: Make conclusions about how characters are feeling throughout the text.

SC: Complete a timeline showing grandpa’s feelings with the addition of pictures.

The writer has written the poem about remembering his time in the war.

The poem has 9 verses. A verse is like a paragraph but used in poetry and lyrics.

Answer with full sentences

eg. Who is your teacher in Room 7?

Correct: Mrs Parker is my teacher in Room 7

Wrong: Mrs Parker

Why do you think Grandpa decided NOT to tell his grandson the first things that came into his memory?

Make a timeline for each verse of the poem to show how grandpa is feeling. Add an image for each verse also. The first one has been done for you

Verse 1	Verse 2	Verse 3	Verse 4	Verse 5
sad hurt terror frustrated pain cause horror mad scary sorry emotional nightmare	sad	hurt	terror	frustrated
screaming hot stinky leeches flies distrust terrible unwell fear mistake dirtied disappointed

Verse 6 /on the first story of verse 1 the child said what did grandpa did in the war and grandpa got all emotional and started have tears.	Verse 7 /grandpa skin got all creepy. Grandpa said he was crawling through the mud back in the war he had a nightmare and he was full of terror.	Verse 8 /He said again what did grandpa did in the war and he was still causing pain but they brought back the horror.	Verse 9 /Grandpa vision came back but he was still telling the story what happen in the war he said that he was tramping in the jungle,hot stinking with leeches and flies.
I felt so sad because grandpa was getting so emotional.	on verse 2 I had a terror in my eyes and was scary.	I was getting so mad because the grandson has been causing pain	grandpa was on a boat overseas and he was sea sick