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Friday 22 June 2018

Argument writing. Fenchurch Liquor store.

For my opinion I think Fenchurch liquor store should be banned. It's affecting people who are living around our community.

The liquor store is next to many schools. Young college students can just go and buy a box a beer. If college students buy beer at your liquor store they can drink and drive, that could lead them to have accidents on the road or get a fine.

Residents are getting affected by the liquor store, especially younger kids. Young kids are following the footsteps of adults. You liquor store is very open and young kids can just walk in and be exposed to alcohol galore. I think that your liquor store should be transformed into another shop.

People who drinks alcohol can cause  fight. Residents that lives across the road can give notes about noise complaints. The illegal age that allows people to buy alcohol is 18 and over, but I think it's a good idea if people don't drink and also buy beers. To prevent these people to stop drinking alcohol is to ban Fenchurch Liquor store this can make our community more safe.

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