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Thursday 27 August 2015

Made up story about mall

Once there was two people walking their names were Tracey and Eric. Eric said to Tracey, “ We need to buy some food supplies”. Tracey and Eric rush to the mall before the mall closed down. They were there but there was suddenly a noise. The security man said on the loud-hailer, “ the mall is going to shut down in 20 minutes. So Tracey and Eric went in the elevator and Tracey was play with the buttons because the mall was closing down. Tracey ran out of the elevator when the elevator stop on level 3. Eric was running but after all he was not running because his shoes lace was tied around a big pole. Tracey said to Eric,” Let’s go to the food court” But when Tracey turned around he wasn't behind her. Eric was shouting to Tracey. Tracey didn't hear him because she thought that he was still in the elevator playing with the button. Eric saw some people going out and he said to some people, “can you please help me” but the people didn't help because they were too busy going through the door before the mall close down.

Tracey went to the food court but no one was there just the people that work there. The people said to Tracey, “ come here, come here” but the owner of the mall came and told the people to stop forcing Tracey to come to there food place. Tracey went to the sushi shop and brought sushi’s for her and Eric. Tracey ran to the car but she did not see Eric anywhere she just remember that Eric shoelaces was tied around the pole. She ran to him fast as she can and help him before the mall closed down and then they made it out just on time.

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