I finally made it..... (Narrative writing)

One day there was a boy named “Josh”, he has a black hair, wearing a red tracksuit and a black running shoe. He was trying to accomplish a goal, Josh joined a marathon. The marathon was “tomorrow” he said, he wanted to come 1st in that marathon because he want to show people that he is good.

The next morning he was at the marathon, Josh was very scared that he won’t make it half way. Josh and the other competitors were ready to run, the horn went off. Josh was jogging on the start, the other competitors were off sprinting. Josh was just taking his time thinking he will catch up with the others, he sawed a bunch of people puffed out. Josh was angry at the people for sprinting off, he said to himself “Why did they run to fast”. Josh just jogged away from the competitors.

An hour later, Josh was 1 km away from the finish line. Josh was puff out from the longest run he have ever experience, Josh was sprinting he was passing other people, he tripped over. People just ran passed him like nothing happen, Josh was yelling in pain. Medical people came and try to sought out Josh, the medic people said “He needs to come of the running track”, they picked him up on the stretches. Josh said Is my leg in a really bad condition”, the medic people reply “Yes”, Josh was shocked. He made a goal to make it to the finish line.

Josh just ripped of the belt from the stretches, limping his way towards the finish line. The medical people rush towards Josh, they were telling him to “Stop, your are in very bad conditions”. He just ignored them and limped his way to the finish line. People was cheering him on, “Let go Josh, let go Josh”, as they cheering him on, Josh was 5 metres away from the finish line. He didn’t know what to do, yelling “Ouch” as he was limping. He finally made it towards the finish line, people was yelling “Yayyyy”. He started to cried, he was crying in tears of joy, but at the same time he was in pain. Josh got rushed to the hospital, the doctors said “If you didn’t ran towards the finish line you wouldn’t been in critical condition”.

The next day, Josh got was alright to go back home. He ranged up his wife to pick him up at Waledale hospital. Josh was relief that he made to the finish line yesterday afternoon, Josh went home if a happy smile.